Error
Types
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Error examples and feedback (correction)
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1
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Verb tense
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After that,
the ruling regime fell down and the new government cannot recover.
Feedback (after, FB): Be consistent - use “past” tense (-> “could not”)
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2
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Verb form
(errors in
formation of the verb phrase except for tense markings)
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Being grown up in
the minority group feels confusing.
FB: Use “active” verb form (-> “growing up”)
It is better to stop it than to let
the situation going out of control.
FB: Let + obj (N.) + base verb (-> “let the situation go”)
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3
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Subject-verb (number) agreement
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EstablishingS new laws and resources at both state and federal
levels arev necessary.
FB:
A subject in a(n) “~ing/to~” form is singular (-> “is necessary”)
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4
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Pronoun
(e.g., Missing or wrong referent / agreement with the
antecedent)
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FB:
“Someone” is singular (“they are” -> “he/she is”)
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5
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Articles/determiners
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I am from different universe.
FB: Which universe your came from is unknown to the
reader (-> “a universe”)
Internet offers many options for photo storage and
organization.
FB: There is only one internet that everyone knows (à “the internet”)
Refer to “Article” handout
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6
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Noun
endings
(e.g., plural or possessive endings)
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I received a lot of positive feedbacks.
FB: This
is a non-count noun
(-> “feedback”)
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7
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Word
choice
(e.g., incorrect
use of idioms, using informal words, collocational problems)
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He looks down to others who are less
fortunate than him.
FB:
Idiom error (-> "look down on" someone)
I hope to succeed the goal.
FB:
Collocation error (-> “achieve/reach”
the goal)
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8
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Word
form
(Using
a wrong part of speech)
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We need to analysis
this problem.
FB: This is a noun form. You need a VERB here
(-> "analyze”)
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9
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Sentence
structure
(general)
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It was reported that administratorss decidedv to make Chicago River swimmable intensifiedv
the debate.
FB: You have two verbs in this that-clause. Only one
subject + verb is allowed in one clause. (“intensified” -> “,which
intensified”)
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10
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Sentence
structure
(e.g., run-on sentences)
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Technology cannot behave as powerful as the traditional teaching
method all the time, combining
both could make our teaching-and-learning system much more effective.
FB: You can’t join two complete sentences (independent
clauses) using comma alone. You should add a conjunction word in addition to
the comma. (“,” -> “,so”)
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11
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Sentence
structure
(e.g., fragments)
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One stereo type is that the Islamic
religion treats women very badly. Which is
not true.
FB: This is not a complete sentence,
which can’t stand alone with a period. Connect it to the previous sentence
with a comma (-> “One stereo type is that the Islamic
religion treats women very badly, which is not true”) |
12
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Punctuation
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Alumnus Max Abramovitz an
architect of New York City’s Lincoln Center designed Krannert Center.
FB: You need to enclose this phrase in
commas because it’s a break within a sentence that supplements and adds
information to the subject. Refer to Punctuation handout
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13
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Missing
elements
(e.g., Missing
object, verb, subject, relative pronouns, complementizer [1])
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The
advantages of preventing are bigger than
disadvantages.
FB: Preventing WHAT? You’re missing an object.
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14
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Spelling
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I have received a
lot of complements.
FB: Check the spelling (-> compliments)
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15
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Informal language
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Cloning is
an awesome technology.
FB: This is
informal. Use more formal, specific word (e.g., beneficial, useful)
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[1]
In a syntax term, this problem has to do with missing “arguments”. Certain verb
requires certain number of arguments (agent, patient, beneficiary, recipient,
etc.) this could also be categorized as sentence structure problem.
Note 1: Run-on sentences and fragments (#10, 11) could also be labelled as “Sentence Boundaries”. The informal language (#15) could also be seen as a word choice (#7) error. Using passive voice, categorized under verb from (#2) in this table could also be its own category. Note that many example sentences in this chart include multiple types of errors, but focus on the type of error that each sentence belongs to. Depending on your student’s level and needs, you may provide the comment with or without possible revision (i.e., phrases in parenthesis).
Note 2: For unfamiliar grammar terms, please refer to Grammar Term Glossary
References:
Ferris, D. (2002). Treatment of Error in Second Language Student Writing. Ann Arbor, M.I.:UM Press. The example sentences are mostly compiled from ESL 505 Summer 2011 and ESL 501 Fall 2011 student essays)